Blue Fairy

ok i'll rate sleeping valor's too. 10/10 it's adoreable.

At the moment this looks like one big block of text. If you seperate it into more paragraphs it would be easy for the reader and you might get more ...

I like them. There good. It's a good picture quality for a phone as well. The older craig looks more detailed but maybe that's because he's bigger. I love that ...

this was interesting to read and I really liked it. I couldn't find much to crit. the only thing I could think of pointing out is: “What was that?” John ...

8/10 strange but i like both of them

10/10 It's so pretty

flight

granted but then you can't turn back and everyone forgets about you. I wish I could find my multicoloured socks.

hi I really enjoyed reading this. Time to nitpick. (sorry) :D Her sweat matted her hair to her drenched forehead. She was aware that she had screamed, but it roused ...

very mysterious prologue. cant wait to read more :D

I loved it. you are a great writer. :D what I would say is space the paragraphs out a bit more so it's easier to read. I can't wait to ...

This was really good :D I loved the interaction between your character and Griffin. It brought things to life. I noticed a few mistakes in the tense but not many. ...

known for her really good avatar :D

i do all three but type everything out when ive finished. i think editing is easier on a computer because its quicker.

because it's hard to be creative all the times Can you dig to the other side of the world?